Great! Bit of work on the teeth n it'd be perfect. Yoochun's got freakin' hard teeth to draw! You did great but the perspectives a bit off. You need to half the two teeth on the left. It'll give the illusion of depth. You got the angle right an everything though.

You're like super good at shading. I swear I have to force myself to shade sometimes and I usually never shade enough.

hmmm... Yoochun's got fangs... *imagines vampire role play smex*