Great! Bit of work on the teeth n it'd be perfect. Yoochun's got freakin' hard teeth to draw! You did great but the perspectives a bit off. You need to half the two teeth on the left. It'll give the illusion of depth. You got the angle right an everything though.
You're like super good at shading. I swear I have to force myself to shade sometimes and I usually never shade enough.
hmmm... Yoochun's got fangs... *imagines vampire role play smex*
you must read the vampire stories....they are really good ( yeah I'm conceited) and I can't stop reading them even though I wrote them. Is it weird that my own stuff turns me on?
Yeah, teeth are a bitch. Thanks for the constructive criticism. The shading seems to be easy for me. I'll just practicing. Practice makes perfet ( or close to it).
It was like pulling teeth to get me to shade at first. I'm jealous that it comes to you naturally. And teeth are evil! I recently uploaded a sketch of Jae on my deviant art and didn't even notice one of his teeth was all screwed up till I posted it lol Too lazy to fix it n re-scan it and all that jazz. >_
Just keep plugging at it. My husband got a paying art job, but his stuff is really different. He does science fiction and fantasy art mostly. He's creating monsters for an RPG game.
I opened up a deviant art account but it's confusing. If you get a chance, check out the vampire stories I wrote. I'm pretty sure today will bethe finale.
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Date: 2009-04-28 01:06 am (UTC)You're like super good at shading. I swear I have to force myself to shade sometimes and I usually never shade enough.
hmmm... Yoochun's got fangs... *imagines vampire role play smex*
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Date: 2009-04-28 01:12 am (UTC)Yeah, teeth are a bitch. Thanks for the constructive criticism. The shading seems to be easy for me. I'll just practicing. Practice makes perfet ( or close to it).
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